On 17th October, our group had begun the Preliminary Exercise for our Media Studies Practical coursework and now we have nearly completed the video. The video is about a murderer who has been tortured and tormented by people in his childhood and he decides to take revenge for this treatment. One of the tormenters is main character’s father, who killed the murderer’s mother as well as his only friend. We shot a scene in an interrogation room and the murderer was shown being dragged in. The interrogator was shown talking to him in the scene that took place. The clip that is shot takes place in the interrogation room and the interrogator asks the murderer some questions about the murders that he has committed. The shooting is incomplete, although a large portion has been done. We have learned a lot from our mistakes with camera movements and angles and are working on our current project keeping these experiences in mind.
Saad, Afia and I have begun the storyboard for our final project- the opening titles. Hopefully this project will be even better than the first two. Since this year we will be working on the brief of opening titles, our group has decided to work in the genre of Thriller Films. This is what has been decided so far and we seem to be committed to this genre.
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the interrogation room and the interrogator asks him (who?)
some questions about the murders that he (who?)
(rewrite this) had committed and for which he was in the interrogation room. (He is suspected?)
The shooting is still left, (incomplete not left)
however most of it is (has been) completed. We have learnt a lot from our mistakes concerned (delete concerned) with camera movement and angle(s) and are working (on the current project with) keeping (delete keeping) the (learning from our previous project) in mind.
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Saad, Afia and I have begun (working on a) the (delete the) story board (for not of) of the final project (end the sentence here) that will be submitted in March. Hopefully this project will be even better than the first two. Since this year we will be (working on the brief that requires) Opening Titles, our group has decided to work in the genre of Thriller films. This is what has been decided so far and we seem to be committed to this genre.